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It should have been a good piece.

I mean, if you record it in a studio with some good facilities...

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A little comment

I think you can weaken the drum kits and re-inforce the atmosphere of the piece by using strings. But anyway, it should have been voted with mostly 4/5's or 5/5's.
As CalculusNova said, "I was simply going through all of the below 1.0 ranked songs to see which beautiful masterpieces were marked down by incompetent listeners (or lack there of), and I came across this one."
Keep up the good work.

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What's the purpose.

This song is totally off-keys, off-melodies and off-side. I really doubt the purpose you submit this record.
My response is NO STARS.

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Improvable

You can do some more improvements on this song's chords.

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Your mood didn't agree with your song?

The song gave me the feeling that you want to express happiness when you're sad - especially when the song suddenly stopped.

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OvalsinOuterSpace responds:

don't know, i just made it for no reason...

I do not agree with this style.

I heard several of your works and found that they were composed in a similar way - one sentence in different keys with little modification, which I call "Enya style". Personally, I do not agree with this style. You've got a long way to go before you can make it like Enya did.

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Armirable courage.

Seldom people had tried to combine classic & R&B & strong beats.
You're a pioneer. But you need more study.

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Ludzix responds:

Yay XD

Just courage is not enough.

I appreciate your courage of writing and performing a sonatina with a computer. However, simply courage is not enough for composing a masterpiece. I strongly advise you to read more about Johann S Bach and Wolfgang A Mozart and their theorems and listen and study their pieces.
I hope you will learn from them.
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No drum, please!

As long as these piece is a Romance, please never use any drums or beating effects. Otherwise, the atmosphere of romance, love and peace will be ruined!

I do not like the ending.

I can see that you spent a lot of time arranging the melodies. But I still cannot give you 10 of 10 because I do not like the ending - when the remembering of life was reaching its climax, everything suddenly stopped. This enlarges people the fear to death.
I strongly suggest you to replace the sudden end with guadual weakening because it will make the ending of life more quiet and peaceful and, thus, happy.
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CelticLightning O'Fearghail @meallanfearghail

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Columbia College

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